Peut-on me dire si c'est correcte ? Et corriger les fautes s'il y en a.

Trilingual but tired
I don’t like travelling new places
I love car races
He enjoys hip-hop music
But i dislike electronic
I don’t come to be success
I’m trilingual but tired

I’m trilingual but tired
I can learn languages easily
I could do all sports
I must finish tidie my bedroom
I need to Holiday
I’m trilingual but tired

I would like to stay at my home
I’d like to be milionaire
He enjoys fly in the sky
I’d like to have 20/20 on this control
I’d like to have my « bac »
I’m trilingual but tired.