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Pollution is one of the most serious threats to the environment and human’s health.
The biggest responsible for pollution is man. He do his works and doesn’ t care about the environment.
Pollution is caused by excessive cutting trees so The earth will become desert and The amount of oxygen decreases and the amount of CO2 rises this latter is responsible for air pollution. Also fumes of vehicles and factories. This results in intractable diseases such as lung cancer and skin. And The climat is also changing.
Man throws waste in rivers and valleys. This makes the water dirty. But the most serious activity on human health is the flow of factories's oils and chemicals in the sea. This leads to water pollution.and We know that the earth represents the proportion of 3 / 4 of water. So the fish die and all the sea creatures.and fisherman lose their jobs.
Earth is also polluting. When using pesticides and chemical fertilizers, this affects negatively on human health and even on the animal. And sometimes They lead to death because they contain toxic substances
Pollution is one of the most serious threats to the environment and human’s health.
The biggest responsible for pollution is man. He do his works and doesn’ t care about the environment.
Pollution is caused by excessive cutting trees so The earth will become desert and The amount of oxygen decreases and the amount of CO2 rises this latter is responsible for air pollution. Also fumes of vehicles and factories. This results in intractable diseases such as lung cancer and skin. And The climat is also changing.
Man throws waste in rivers and valleys. This makes the water dirty. But the most serious activity on human health is the flow of factories's oils and chemicals in the sea. This leads to water pollution.and We know that the earth represents the proportion of 3 / 4 of water. So the fish die and all the sea creatures.and fisherman lose their jobs.
Earth is also polluting. When using pesticides and chemical fertilizers, this affects negatively on human health and even on the animal. And sometimes They lead to death because they contain toxic substances
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Man throws waste in rivers and valleys. This makes the water dirty. But the most serious activity on human health is the flow of factories's oils and chemicals in the sea. This leads to water pollution. and We know that the earth represents the proportion of 3 / 4 of water. So the fish die and all the sea creatures. and fisherman loses their jobs.
The earth is also polluted. When using pesticides and chemical fertilizers, this affects negatively on human health and even on the animal. And sometimes They lead to death because they contain toxic substances
Pollution is one of the most serious threats to the environment and human health.
The biggest responsibility for pollution is man. He does his works and doesn’t care about the environment.
Pollution is caused by excessive cutting trees so The earth will become desert and The amount of oxygen decreases and the amount of CO2 rises this latter is responsible for air pollution. Also fumes of vehicles and factories. This results in intractable diseases such as lung cancer and skin. And The climate is also changing.
Man throws waste in rivers and valleys. This makes the water dirty. But the most serious activity on human health is the flow of factories's oils and chemicals in the sea. This leads to water pollution and We know that the earth represents the proportion of 3 / 4 of water. So the fish die and all the sea creatures and fisherman loses their jobs.
The earth is also polluted. When using pesticides and chemical fertilizers, this affects negatively on human health and even on the animal. And sometimes They lead to death because they contain toxic substances