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My heroine is name Scorpioman.

He is tall, thin, has black hair and he alaways has black and red clothes on him.

He looks like a teenager of 16 years old.

He is curious, intelligent, logical, stubborn, but also naive.

However, he is the most respected of his town, Cambera (capitale de l'autralie). He has a strong mind and can be very clever.

Before to be known he lived with his family in Manchester, but few times after the death of his mother they moved in cambera for his father's job.He was just 10 years old.

In the plane, next to him was an old woman who got three strange animals, that he never saw, except one which was a scorpio. They were not in boxes or something close; they were just in a small bag next to the woman. When she was sleeping he tried to stil the scorpio; but he but he defended himself by tuching him with his poisonous tail. To his surprise, nothing happended for the moment but one year after he develloped strange comportement during his techer was yelling at him. He was flying! After this evenement he decided to know why he did this. His twin, who loved oracles explained that he had other powers. After exams, with him they discorvered that he could fly than being invisible and having intutions in case of danger.All this time after, he was saving his country like his favourite heroine, ironman.

Today he has a lot of ennemies, but the worst was Norman Osborn.

At 16 years old, he is still figthing for a better world, his objectifs are: fighting crime in Australia, and saving the planet.