hey,j'ai besoin d'aide pour une Production écrite en anglais svp ^^
La population de Londres en a assez de la situation dans l’East End: criminalité, insalubrité, exploitation des enfants pauvres... Un groupe de personnes à l’origine de cette protestation a décidé de les aider en s’adressant directement à la reine Victoria, et tu es chargé(e) de rédiger la pétition. Voici le plan qu’on t’a suggéré. Sers-t-en pour rédiger ton texte : 1) describe the situation, (décrire la situation) 2) suggest what is needed, (suggérer des mesures, des solutions) 3) explain why it is needed. (expliquer en quoi elles sont nécessaires)
la production doit commencer par:
Your Majesty, The people in the East End...[etc]
merci a ceux qui m'aideront ^^
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Lilou97250
Salut ! Voilà ce que j'ai écrit (un peu en retard désolée):
Your Majesty, The people of the East End is tired of the crime, insalubrity and exploitation of poor children, which plunges our neighborhood into misery and insecurity.
The population needs more community police, more renovated and safe houses. We must also to put the children back to school. We appeal to your kindness to build new houses, police stations and schools in our neighborhood for the well-being of all its inhabitants.
Have a job, feel safe, live in a beautiful house and see your children growing up happy isn't it accessible to your subjects from the East End ?
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Your Majesty,
The people of the East End is tired of the crime, insalubrity and exploitation of poor children, which plunges our neighborhood into misery and insecurity.
The population needs more community police, more renovated and safe houses. We must also to put the children back to school. We appeal to your kindness to build new houses, police stations and schools in our neighborhood for the well-being of all its inhabitants.
Have a job, feel safe, live in a beautiful house and see your children growing up happy isn't it accessible to your subjects from the East End ?
Most respectfully,
Your humble subjects.
Bonne lecture ;)