bjr :) pouvez vous m'aidez s'il vous plaît je l'avais déjà posté mais son indiquez la consigne j'ai vraiment du mal avec l'anglais. merci à la personne qui m'apportera son aide :)
Bonsoir, je veux bien t'aider. Je vais commencer, je t'envoie dans pas longtemps
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fat8889
Alors voici le travail : I am really honored to be here today. I'll speak for my community and on behalf of my community to which people haven't given enough voice. Colonization has caused an important decrease of (amerindiens en anglais je sais pas comment le dire) and a huge fragmentation of our community. My ancestors who lived peacefully were assassinated, their lands plundered as well as their ressources. This is why today we are trying to make ourselves heard
fat8889
2/ So that this never happens again. We are also trying to relay our culture because even though it is really different from Western culture, ours has endured over time for centuries. To exemplifly we have face paintings rites, traditional dances, songs. All these reflect feelings and homages to our ancestors. Our paints and clothes are made naturally from plants, minerals. We also have many (fêtes traditionnelles en anglais) like Pow Wow during which we celebrate our warriors or religion.
fat8889
3/ Our practices are often misunderstood, however they mean a lot to is and were already practiced at the time of our ancestors, long before colonization. To finish I'd like to relay a messqge of peace to everyone and young people. History is past but we musn't forget what hapenned so as not to reproduce past mistakes. The mass assasinations, violences, looting suffered by my ancestors must not be forgotten. Moreover we sould all be open mind and respect others cultures so we'll live in
fat8889
better world. Ensuite tu peux finir en remerciant de t'avoir écouté etc.
fat8889
et tu peux ajouter de ton cours sur la partie culture des amerindiens, j'ai mis ce que j'ai vu mais il doit y avoir plus d'exemples dans tes cours
fat8889
je viens aussi de relire et il y a 2,3 mini fautes de frappe de ma part dsl, Envoie mon ton travail final à la fin et je corrigerai. Je suis quasi bilingue en anglais
varelianetobi
dcc lorsque j'ai fini je te remercie énormément
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Bonsoir, je veux bien t'aider. Je vais commencer, je t'envoie dans pas longtemps