bonjour à tous

j'ai fais une redaction en anglais où je devais mettre (le comparatif , du preterit ,et du present perfect )

pour décrire mon appartement , pouvais me dire si j'ai bien ajouter ceux qui qui sont entre les parentheses svp car j'ai un doute
merci a tous de votre aide


I changed housing last year, in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms, my mother's is bright.
She a bed, a piece of furniture with a television, a small piece of furniture
In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet

This is a small bed is a table on a left, a furniture of television and the console of games, and a large table of 5 shelves.

the bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths
a small piece of furniture to fix on the wall where can we store the toiletries and something else

the kitchen is average, there is a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture
there is a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another shelf
Last year, I changed my apartment in my new apartment, there are 3 bedrooms, my mother's is bright. She a bed, a piece of furniture with a television, a small piece of furniture
In the hallway and the shelf inside the closet
This is a small bed is a table on a left, a furniture of television and the console of games, and a large table of 5 shelves.
the bathroom is white, there is a bathtub that allows you to take long baths
a small piece of furniture to fix on the wall where can we store the toiletries and something else
the kitchen is average, there is a gas stove, a refrigerator, a freezer, a table, a kitchen furniture
separate from the dining room there is a table, a sideboard, a cabinet of 4 shelves and another
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merci encore