Bonjour à tous j'aurais besoin de personne s'y connaissant bien en anglais pour me donner leurs avis sur ma lettre de motivation pour une future matière s'appellant Anglais Européen dans mon lycée , sachant que je n'ai jamais fait de lettre de motivation, dans aucune langue merci d'avance. :) Motivation letter for European English Mrs, Mr I am actually aged of 15 years old and I'm in my fourth and last year at the commandant Cousteau high school. I’m writing this for my future studies in the college Pierre Mendès, I’m Particularly interested in language studies and I'd like to travel a lot, I’m a serious and calm student who love English, and to travel like I said earlier, and I think that European English will help me a lot in the future to learn more English. Because it is a really important language, it’s the most spoken language around the world and I’d really like at the end of the College to work in another country, as a Scientist or anything else. I actually don’t really know what I want to do when I'll be an Adult, but I'm sure that if I continue to follow my dreams and hoping I'll get to do what I want to do. So that’s why I'm writing this letter because if you could really give me a chance I’ll work really hard in this class in order to get good grades and to realize my dream to work in another country Waiting for a response of you, Yours Sincerely
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Sasha21
Il y a très peu de fautes c'est un très belle lettre. Cela ne change pas beaucoup mais regarde : "who love English, and to travel like I said earlier" -who loves English, and travel, as I said earlier "but I'm sure that if I continue to follow my dreams and hoping I'll get to do what I want to do" -but I'm sure that if I continue to follow my dreams and hoping, I'll get what I want to do.
C'est une très belle lettre ! en t'espérant une réponse positive :-)
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Delca
Merci beaucoup pour ton aide et pour le compliment :)
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Cela ne change pas beaucoup mais regarde :
"who love English, and to travel like I said earlier"
-who loves English, and travel, as I said earlier
"but I'm sure that if I continue to follow my dreams and hoping I'll get to do what I want to do"
-but I'm sure that if I continue to follow my dreams and hoping, I'll get what I want to do.
C'est une très belle lettre ! en t'espérant une réponse positive :-)