Bonjour à tous, pourriez-vous me corriger ce texte (anglais) s'il y a des fautes? svp et merci d'avance.
HI, my name is --- ---- and I'm thirteen year old girl. I'm in 8th grade. Today, like many of us, I run for to be a president.
I think we don't have enough activities like outings or trips. It's for this reason that I wish to organize more outings and as well as a trip to Madrid for all the 8th grade. Then, I want to buy an hamster or rabbit that every students will keep on a weekend. Why? Because I want to ad ambiance to the class. I want also change the timetable. And finally I wish to create a drawing club for fans of drawing during recess.
A president must be creative, determinade and confident.
Thanks for your attention. And don't forget on thing, I'M YOUR FRIEND !
HI, my name is --- ---- and I'm thirteen year old girl. I'm in 8th grade. Today, like many of us, I run for to be a president.
I think we don't have enough activities like outings or trips. It's for this reason that I wish to organize more outings and as well as a trip to Madrid for all the 8th grade. Then, I want to buy an hamster or rabbit that every students will keep on a weekend. Why? Because I want to ad ambiance to the class. I want also change the timetable. And finally I wish to create a drawing club for fans of drawing during recess.
A president must be creative, determinade and confident.
Thanks for your attention. And don't forget on thing, I'M YOUR FRIEND !
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I think we don't have enough activities like outings or trips. That's the reason why that I want to organize more outings and as well a trip to Madrid for every student in 8th grade. Then, I want to adopt an hamster or a rabbit which one student a week will bring back at home. Why? Because I want to add more "life" to the classroom. I will also change the desks. And finally I will create a drawing club during recess.
A president must be creative, determinate and confident, so i am.
Thanks for your attention. And don't forget on thing, I'M YOUR FRIEND AND YOUR FUTURE !
Si je t'ai aidé donne moi des points stp