Bonjour à tous, voilà mon sujet :

(Tu es un(e) élève anglais(e) à Londres. Le mois dernier, tu as gagné un prix pour une
rédaction. Le prix était un voyage d’études pour une semaine au Canada. Tu as été accueilli(e) dans une
famille canadienne. Aujourd’hui, le 15 février, est le dernier jour de ton séjour. Tu dois envoyer un courriel
à ta classe en Angleterre et raconter ton séjour


et j'ai répondu :

Sunday, February the 15th,

Hello everyone !
You can't imagine how Canada is a wonderful country ! When I arrived one week ago, I first met my Canadian family : The atson . They are very friendly and funny, I instantly liked them.During the first day, I discovered Toronto, and I thought it was a really nice and great city, even if it was extremely cold !
And guess what ? I went to an ice hockey game, the most popular sport in Canada . Toronto ( the Maple leafs) were playing against Ottawa (the Senators) . The game was really exciting, and the score at the end was three to five to Toronto.I went to the match in car with all the Atson .
Oh, and I also visited two museums during the week . I've learnt a lot of things about Canada's history . Did you guys know that The Cree Plains People, a Canadian First Nation, wore clothes made from buffalo hides ? They travelled on horseback and if people were sick they were taken to see a shaman !

I miss you all,
Betty

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