Bonjour,
Cette question s'adresse à ceux qui ont un bon niveau en anglais.
Je dois créer un poème (sans rimes), le sujet c'est la fraternité (the brotherhood).
Je veux savoir si j'ai fais tes fautes de syntaxe, d'orthographe, de conjugaison, de temps des verbes...
Voici le poème en question:
Your best friend and you have a special bond
He’s the only one who wants to be always by your side
Of course, he doesn’t want to break you down...
But he really wants to build you up!
For your life, he’s too important as the breath
The brotherhood is the best value we can have
When you have a heartache, he cheers you up
From the dawn until the dusk, he stays with you
When he sees you’re ebbing, he’s worried for you
He’s faithful in friendship
So, you think he will go to the heaven!
You’re shackled together against the hardships
You and him are indie but inseparable
Even if he has his sins, you give him the forgiveness
If he’s helpless, you can’t abandon him!
Your relationship gives him wings
So, he can dare everything for you
He’s the only person that you can whisper your secrets
Your friend helps you to reach your goals

Merci d'avance de votre aide!