Bonjour demain j'ai un devoir d'anglais et j'ai traduit sur reverso et je voudrais savoir si sa choque ou si il y a des fautes dans mon texte merci: My name is Jeanne and I built a time machine. We are May 6th, 2015 and it is 2:50 pm. I decided to go in the 20s (roaring twenties) more exactly in 1926 in the city of New York,Jersey City.I wanted at first to go in 2999 but I said to myself that a controlled mentally ill person the world and that I was going to be killed. Who knows? I am at my home in France, in a small apartment. The machine is in the lounge and I go to her. I specify the date to which I want to go and I press the button. The machine makes strange noises and a blow offlash and so, I find myself in a room). The machine is in front of. I am not at my home (with me). Everything is so old. A paper white bread with brown flowers recovers all the room. There was a brown armchair, an office whichlooks like that of my grandfather and other armchair green as in the movies of mafia. I wore a white dress, heels. My hair arrived at me at the level of the shoulders and was curly blond. I approached the office and I saw a schedule (diary). We were May 6th, 1926. I go out of the house and I was in a district. I possessed a car. She was very beautiful. Blanche and blacks and tires were big. I wondered which genre of nobody I was here. I thought of coming in the 1920s with my clothes off future. I saw a girl and I asked him for help. She was very beautiful. Her hair was red and curled. She was called Lana. I told her that I had come to spend the holidays in this city. She invited me to drink a coffee at her home. She explains me that Jersey City was a rather nice city but that the best was New York and that I absolutely had to go there. It was 3:03 pm. When we had stopped drinking our coffee, she drove me in New York. She too possessed a car. She was 27 years old, single. She often danced in a pub in New York. We arrived in New York. It was just magic. It was not very different from now on but the atmosphere which reigned changed everything. She wanted to know if I had already come to New York (I wanted to tell her " in the 20s, no! » Although even in 2015 I went there never). She also wanted to know where from I came. I had to pay attentionto what I said because can change the future when simply I could be arrested for impersonating. I said that I came from France and that I spent holidays here. She was very impressed and she wanted that I visit everything. She parked in a street. She told me that it was the 42nd very known street and that there was many shop here. She invited me to look at a silent movie of Charles Chaplin " the gold rush " which had gone out last year and which they had put back this year. By working in the street I saw fold written posters "Wanted" above. Inthe photo, there was a man, rather big wearing a hat. He had written there also " Alphonse Gabriel Capone alias Al Capone ". This name told me something and I had remembered in history, we had to speak of him. Al Capone was one of more famous gangsters Americans. We also called him "Scarface". Arrived at the cinema, we paid our place. At the exit of the cinema Lana put deposits me "at my home” and she had told me to prepare me for 10 pm. We went to a pub. I looked for what I was going to put in the cupboard. It was crazy the number of dresses which there was. I chose a typical dress of the 20s to dance the Charleston. It was 7 pm and I did not too much know what to do. Internet missed me. There was a library and all the collection of Sherlock Holmes's books. I read the first volume. At 9 pm I made eggs on the flat and I began to get ready. 7:30 pm, Lana and I we were on the way to the pub. On the route Lana and I planes spoken a lot. It was crazy to find itself in an evening with a girl whom we knew that for 6 hours. Lana had a feather in her hair, a golden short dress and black fringes. Mine was turquoise blue with fringes. The pub was very livened up. There were manygirls with cups to the flapper. We called them "Flappers". Lana me learnt by the steps of the Charleston. I did not know how to dance, but as one goes along I danced as a dancer. Two days later, Lana decided to take me in a gallery sees paints of the famous painter Edward Hopper. After that we had left seeing Louis Armstrong. I did not manage to believe it, to see Louis Armstrong in front of me. On June 7th, 2015 Lana and I were of the truth but. Unfortunately, Ihad to return on June 10th and that made me something leave and see again her no more
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