bonjour désoler je me suis tromper je voulais demandez si quelqu'un pouvais me le corrigez.
OCD, there can be a thousand kinds. Some more discreet than others. But all have one thing in common . There are some who have the need to always wash their hands Or they have eating disorders ou en depression, etc... It cannot be cured because it is an incurable disease.
OCD, there can be a thousand kinds. Some more discreet than others. But all have one thing in common . There are some who have the need to always wash their hands Or they have eating disorders ou en depression, etc... It cannot be cured because it is an incurable disease.
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Bonsoir, voici la réponse à ta question, j'espère que ça t'aidera.
Texte Corrigé :
OCD, there can be a thousand kinds. Some are more discreet than others, but everyone has the same one thing in common : there are some of these people, who always need to wash their hands, or they have an eating disorders, depression, or any kind of trouble. It cannot be cured because nowadays, it remains as an incurable sickness.
Texte Original :
OCD, there can be a thousand kinds. Some more discreet than others. But all have one thing in common . There are some who have the need to always wash their hands Or they have eating disorders ou en depression, etc... It cannot be cured because it is an incurable disease.
Observations :
Fait attention au placement de tes mots. Il y a souvent des "have" ou "are" qui sont mal placés, et modifient le sens de la phrase jusqu'à ce que le texte devienne incompréhensible. Pour certains mots tel que "disease" ou "discreet" je pense que c'est du google trade après je ne remet pas en question tes écrits, mais ça ne fait pas naturel dans tes phrases. On pourrait aussi penser à un copier coller, fait donc bien attention à ça le jour d'un exam.
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