Bonjour, est ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider je dois rendre ça pour lundi mais je ne sais pas si il y a beaucoup de fautes. Merci de me dire quelles sont les fautes.
Harry Potter lives with his uncle and aunt. He is quite normal, at least that's what they say. One day a giant named Rubeus Hagrid knocks on the door after multiple letters send but not answered and announces to Harry that he is a sorcerer. That's when it all starts. First, his uncle and aunt denied everything but then they ended up by confessing everything and telling him everything. It was a relief for Harry because the Dursley did not like him. After a long night of sleep Harry waves up thinking that everything was a dream and to his great satisfaction he sees that not everything is real and learns that even if the Dursley faces did not want to pay his studies it was not serious because harry's parents had kept at the sorcerers' bank a lot of money. He goes to the traverse road and buys his school supplies or rather magical. So Harry goes to Hogwarts School of witchcraft met Ron and Hermione his futures best friends but he also met Drago Malfoy jealous he is so many admirers because Harry was very well known. There, he learns a lot about magic and about himself. Especially how is parents really died. During a broom course he pursues Malfoy after this one is stolen an object from one of his friends also in the gryffondor house. gryffondor is the sign of someone courageous and is represented by a lion from when the color red. He is then spotted by professor McGonagall, the director of the gryffindor house and becomes the catcher of the gryffindor quidditch team after the agreement of the director of Hogwarts Albus Dumbledore because the brooms are banned for first year students. After multiple adventurer he discovers Voldemort, and learns by surprise that professor Snape (director of the house slytherin) who does not like Harry is none other than the one who tries to save his life many times. They barely win the cup of the four houses thanks to the points harvested by the three heroes. Ends there their first year. Their holidays are starting and they are not going to be any rest for Harry because remember, the Dursley and the magic do not make good housekeeping. But Harry has an advantage, they do not know that students do not have the right to do magic outside of Hogwarts and especially in front of Muggles (people who have no powers). Harry's going to have a lot of fun.
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Harry Potter lives with his uncle and aunt. He is quite normal, at least that's what they say. One day a giant named Rubeus Hagrid knocks on the door after multiple letters send but not answered and announces to Harry that he is a sorcerer. That's when it all starts. First, his uncle and aunt denied everything but then they ended up by confessing everything and telling him everything. It was a relief for Harry because the Dursley did not like him. After a long night of sleep Harry waves up thinking that everything was a dream and to his great satisfaction he sees that not everything is real and learns that even if the Dursley faces did not want to pay his studies it was not serious because harry's parents had kept at the sorcerers' bank a lot of money. He goes to the traverse road and buys his school supplies or rather magical. So Harry goes to Hogwarts School of witchcraft met Ron and Hermione his futures best friends but he also met Drago Malfoy jealous he is so many admirers because Harry was very well known. There, he learns a lot about magic and about himself. Especially how is parents really died. During a broom course he pursues Malfoy after this one is stolen an object from one of his friends also in the gryffondor house. gryffondor is the sign of someone courageous and is represented by a lion from when the color red. He is then spotted by professor McGonagall, the director of the gryffindor house and becomes the catcher of the gryffindor quidditch team after the agreement of the director of Hogwarts Albus Dumbledore because the brooms are banned for first year students. After multiple adventurer he discovers Voldemort, and learns by surprise that professor Snape (director of the house slytherin) who does not like Harry is none other than the one who tries to save his life many times. They barely win the cup of the four houses thanks to the points harvested by the three heroes. Ends there their first year. Their holidays are starting and they are not going to be any rest for Harry because remember, the Dursley and the magic do not make good housekeeping. But Harry has an advantage, they do not know that students do not have the right to do magic outside of Hogwarts and especially in front of Muggles (people who have no powers). Harry's going to have a lot of fun.
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