Bonjour est-ce que vous pouvez me dire si dans mon histoire il y’a: -situation initiale -éléments résolutions -situation final -péripétie (aventure) Et s’il vous plaît pouvez-vous le traduire en anglais s’il vous plaît Histoire:
Il était une fois dans une ville dangereuse, une petite fille avec un bonnet rouge rentrait tard dans la nuit, un jour la maîtresse de la petite fille au bonnet rouge préparait des cupcakes pour sa mère qui était malade à cause de cela elle rentra chez elle plus tard que d’habitude avant de prendre le chemin que la maîtresse lui demandait de prendre le chemin le plus éclairé mais qui était le plus éloigné de la maison mais elle a oublié le conseil de la maîtresse distraite par la musique qu’elle écoutait elle a pris le chemin le plus sombre avec peu de lumière et a rencontré un monsieur dans un camion qui a de la ramener à la maison mais elle a refusé l’inconnu dans le camion a insisté qu’il avait peur qu’elle se perdrait qu’elle lui donnera son adresse pour le rassurer et a expliqué au monsieur que sa mère était toute seule le monsieur est arriver avant la petite fille puisque il était en voiture est parti et est arrivé chez la petite fille avec le bonnet rouge il va violer la mere
Once upon a time in a dangerous town, a little girl with a red cap came home late at night, one day the mistress of the little girl in the red cap was baking cupcakes for her mother who was sick because of this she returned home later than usual before taking the path that the mistress asked her to take the brightest path but which was the farthest from the house but she forgot the advice of the mistress distracted by the music she was listening to took the darkest path with little light and met a gentleman in a truck who had to take her home but she refused the stranger in the truck insisted he was afraid she would get lost qu 'she will give him her address to reassure him and explained to the gentleman that his mother was all alone the gentleman arrived before the little girl since he was in the car left and arrived at the little girl's house with the red cap he is going to violate the mother
Je pense que pour les situations et le péripétie c bon
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Once upon a time in a dangerous town, a little girl with a red cap came home late at night, one day the mistress of the little girl in the red cap was baking cupcakes for her mother who was sick because of this she returned home later than usual before taking the path that the mistress asked her to take the brightest path but which was the farthest from the house but she forgot the advice of the mistress distracted by the music she was listening to took the darkest path with little light and met a gentleman in a truck who had to take her home but she refused the stranger in the truck insisted he was afraid she would get lost qu 'she will give him her address to reassure him and explained to the gentleman that his mother was all alone the gentleman arrived before the little girl since he was in the car left and arrived at the little girl's house with the red cap he is going to violate the mother
Je pense que pour les situations et le péripétie c bon