J'ai déjà fait mon devoir, je veux juste une âme généreuse pour corriger mon anglais !
1- Did you think that boarding school was necesary for native children? 2- Did you went in a boarding school during your childhood? 3- How was your daily in a boarding your school? 4- How your parents react when they were supposed to send you in a boarding school? 5- When you come back at your home during holidays, did you talk with your parents about bad treatment? 6- In your poem, " The Runaways", whi is the person who runaway? It is a friend, you or just an inspiration? 7- In your opinion did you think thaht school boarding were necesary to educate natives americans? Because when they become adults, they come back to their home. 8- Have you some scars physical or mental health? 9- Did their children goes to a boarding school? 10- Did you think that some natives americans could revolt?
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Jeremy26i
Bonjour ! 1- DO you think that boarding school was necesary for native children? (<- C'est l'information qui est au passé, pas ta pensée) 2- Did you went in a boarding school during your childhood? OKAY 3- How was your daily in a boarding X school? (<- pas besoins de "your" :)) 4- How your parents react when they were supposed to send you in a boarding school? OKAY 5- When you come back at X home during holidays, did you talk with your parents about bad treatment? (<- '"your" n'est pas nécessaire) 6- In your poem, " The Runaways", WHO is the person who runaway? It is a friend, you or just an inspiration? OKAY 7- In your opinion did you think THAT school boarding were necesary to educate natives americans? Because when they become adults, they come back to their home. OKAY 8- Have you GOT some scars physical or mental health? (<- soit "Have you got" soit "do you have" 9- Did their children goes to a boarding school? OKAY 10- Did you think that some natives americans could revolt? OKAY
Voilà, mise à part quelques fautes, tout est correct :p A bientôt ! :)
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1- DO you think that boarding school was necesary for native children?
(<- C'est l'information qui est au passé, pas ta pensée)
2- Did you went in a boarding school during your childhood? OKAY
3- How was your daily in a boarding X school?
(<- pas besoins de "your" :))
4- How your parents react when they were supposed to send you in a boarding school? OKAY
5- When you come back at X home during holidays, did you talk with your parents about bad treatment? (<- '"your" n'est pas nécessaire)
6- In your poem, " The Runaways", WHO is the person who runaway? It is a friend, you or just an inspiration? OKAY
7- In your opinion did you think THAT school boarding were necesary to educate natives americans? Because when they become adults, they come back to their home. OKAY
8- Have you GOT some scars physical or mental health? (<- soit "Have you got" soit "do you have"
9- Did their children goes to a boarding school? OKAY
10- Did you think that some natives americans could revolt? OKAY
Voilà, mise à part quelques fautes, tout est correct :p
A bientôt ! :)