Bonjour j’ai écris un texte en anglais pour présenter une amie pouvez-vous me dire si il y a des fautes ?
My best friend is Cassandre, she has my age, thirty years old. She lives in ........ and she is very a good personality!
Cassandre is crazy about eating thé chocolate cake but she can’t stand the vegetables.
She enjoys listening to music, reading, watching TV like the angels on Saturday. Cassandre is not thing playing video games. My best friend is honest, very honest, too hardworking and a bit patient. She can’t likes without her books and her CDs. Cassandre is polite because her parents understood her. She is not at all selfish and dishonest. She is between outgoing and shy but she is plus outgoing that shy. Cassandre is not irresponsible and lazy. My best friend likes find out about something very much. She is a bit stubborn. Cassandre has many lacks and many qualities, but she is a beautiful personality and she has a loads of friends like me.
Voilà j’espère que vous m’aiderez!
Sinon merci d’avance !!
My best friend is Cassandre, she has my age, thirty years old. She lives in ........ and she is very a good personality!
Cassandre is crazy about eating thé chocolate cake but she can’t stand the vegetables.
She enjoys listening to music, reading, watching TV like the angels on Saturday. Cassandre is not thing playing video games. My best friend is honest, very honest, too hardworking and a bit patient. She can’t likes without her books and her CDs. Cassandre is polite because her parents understood her. She is not at all selfish and dishonest. She is between outgoing and shy but she is plus outgoing that shy. Cassandre is not irresponsible and lazy. My best friend likes find out about something very much. She is a bit stubborn. Cassandre has many lacks and many qualities, but she is a beautiful personality and she has a loads of friends like me.
Voilà j’espère que vous m’aiderez!
Sinon merci d’avance !!
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ne met pas d'accent. tu as mis thé au lieu de the
Sinon ton texte ets très bien Bravo
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My best friend is Cassandre , she has my age , thirteen ( 13 ) years old . She lives in ....... and she's a very good person !
Cassandre is crazy about drinking tea with a chocolate cake but she really doesn't like the vegetables .
she enjoys listening to music , reading , watching "The Angels" TV shows on saturday . Cassandre doesn't like video games at all . My best friend is honest , very honest , she's also too hardworking and a bit patient . She can't live without her books and CD's .
Cassandre is polite because her parents understand her . she is not selfish and dishonest at all . she's between outgoing and shy but she's more outgoing than shy . Cassandre is not responsible and lazy . My best friend loves get information herself about everything and nothing . She's a bit stubborn .
Cassandre has many lacks and many qualities , but she's a wonderfull person and she has loads of friends like me .
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