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J’ai un oral d’anglais bientôt et j’aimerais que des personnes qui se connaissent bien en anglais corrigent mon texte et me donnent des conseils contre le stress .
Merci beaucoup ☺️:D
Voici le texte : One day, lightening hit my superhero and she feel into a coma. On her waking, she had change.
His name is Hypnogirl.
First , she is able to fly but she is unable to be invisible. And she is able to hypnotize people , but, she is unable to read minds.
Hypnogirl is faster than Wonder Woman. And she is less fearful than Spider Man . In the end, Captain America is less intelligent than Hypnogirl.
Her worst enemy is CoroMan , it’s the creator of coronavirus. He is very dangerous and he is able to contaminate the world.
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J’ai un oral d’anglais bientôt et j’aimerais que des personnes qui se connaissent bien en anglais corrigent mon texte et me donnent des conseils contre le stress .
Merci beaucoup ☺️:D
Voici le texte : One day, lightening hit my superhero and she feel into a coma. On her waking, she had change.
His name is Hypnogirl.
First , she is able to fly but she is unable to be invisible. And she is able to hypnotize people , but, she is unable to read minds.
Hypnogirl is faster than Wonder Woman. And she is less fearful than Spider Man . In the end, Captain America is less intelligent than Hypnogirl.
Her worst enemy is CoroMan , it’s the creator of coronavirus. He is very dangerous and he is able to contaminate the world.
Je vous met aussi la pièce jointe des consignes
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Réponse :
A long time ago, a lightening hit my superhero and she fell into a coma. When she woke up, she had change.
Her name is Hypnogirl.
First, she is able to fly but she's unable/can't be invisible. And she is able to hypnotize people, but, she is unable to read minds.
Hypnogirl is faster than Wonder Woman. And she is less fearful than Spider Man . In the end, Captain America is less intelligent than Hypnogirl.
Her worst enemy is CoroMan , he is the creator of coronavirus. This vilain is very dangerous and he is able to contaminate the world.
Explications :
Au début, tu peux remplacer "one day" par "a long time ago" (bien sûr tu peux dire aussi 1month ago ou when she was still a little kid, etc.) ou "once upon a time" (même si ça fait un peu compte de fée).
Le verbe tomber : Fall, fell, fallen, à ne pas confondre avec ressentir : feel, felt, felt.
Si c'est une fille le pronom d'appartenance est her et si c'est un garçon ça devient his.
Par rapport aux "able/unable" ça fait une répétition mais tu peux les laisser (si tu mets can't, n'oublie pas d'enlever le " 's ")!
Dire "it" désigne souvent un objet alors il est plus courant d'écrire "he/she" pour une personne.
Sinon c'est très bien dans l'ensemble et ne t'inquiète pas tu vas gérer pour l'oral!