Bonjour j’aurais besoin d’aide pour savoir si mon texte est bon et comment l’améliorer merci d’avance :)

Je dois faire un genre de discours sur quelques chose d’important à l’orale

Exemple:
Martin Luther King « I gavé à dream »

J’ai choisis la guerre:

It’s important to know that the war the people think the war doesn’t exist but it’s true they people die everyday for no reason my friends from around the world stop doing fight each other stop all crimes stop killing each other stop killing the innocents persons asked nothing We all lie together in the better world we all live in the world when the futur génération we all live to know the war
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