Bonjour, je dois écrire le résumé d'un thriller, d'un whodunit : Pouvez vous me donner des idées ?
Ce que j'ai déja fait, il y a t-il des erreurs?
What happened, Sarge ? The patrol supervisor read from his notes which come of the testimony of Stella Ben, a witness: M. Ben, a very rich old-man aged 82, who lived alone in a manor, is a victim. The last night he was working at his desk like every night. But, this morning, when his grand-daughter, Stella Ben, came in for her everyday visit, she discovered her grand-father died in the living room.
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Eliina01
Came in for her everyday visit, she discovered her grandfather dead in the living room. Sinon tout est juste ;)
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jul22
What happened, Sarge? Parker said The patrol supervisor read from his notes which come of the testimony told by Stella Ben, a witness: “M. Ben, a very rich old-man aged 82, who lived alone in a manor, is a victim. The last night he was working at his desk like every night. But, this morning, when his grand-daughter, Stella Ben, came in for her everyday visit, she discovered her grand-father dead in the living room. “ est ce juste si je met told by stella dans la 2eme phrase?
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Sinon tout est juste ;)
The patrol supervisor read from his notes which come of the testimony told by Stella Ben, a witness:
“M. Ben, a very rich old-man aged 82, who lived alone in a manor, is a victim. The last night he was working at his desk like every night. But, this morning, when his grand-daughter, Stella Ben, came in for her everyday visit, she discovered her grand-father dead in the living room. “
est ce juste si je met told by stella dans la 2eme phrase?