Bonjour je dois écrire un texte en anglais sur mon métier de rêve . Pouvez vous corriger mon texte où me montré les éventuelles fautes , merci d'avance.
I want to become a doctor. Being one is not only my dream but also my parent's. I don't wish to be the wealthiest and most highly graduated doctor the world's ever seen but I want to be one who will serve her people and country in a true manner. Infact I don't want to be a doctor for only patients but for the needy too. Although I know it isn't everyone's cup of tea to be faithful, humane and achieve great degrees at the same time but it is worth a try. I always want to feel the pride of being loyal to my patients and my duty.
Well it's not always the same story from the beginning infact it was totally different. When I was a little girl, I didn't actually wanted to be a doctor and never was worried about it. All I used to think was being a singer. Ofcourse that was a dream for me which I wished to come true. It included of me always singing silly songs and even recording and playing them back. But soon circumstances changed, I grew up and came to know my real destiny. Although I showed interest in studies from the beginning but singing was something which I used to do everytime, whether I be studying or playing. Many may call it as craziness but this was me as a kid. But as I mentioned earlier, I grew up to know where I belong and concentrated on it.
For now, for real I have a different dream and that is I want to become a doctor.
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Bonjour alors je trouve ça très bien, j'ai noter une petite faute, quand vous dites serve her people, vous devriez enlever le her, je ne vois pas d'erreurs majeures, bon courage ☺️
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