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Merci d'avance à la personne qui me corrigera.
Paragraphe:
I would have chosen a famous British charity called Oxfam.
Their mission is to fight against poverty in the world.
They receive money from donors, governments and from the sale of goods.
I would love to participate and help because I think that we should help the most deprived and that they too have their chance.
But also because there are a lot of people thanks to Oxfam who are no longer in need and have a stable life. If I could contribute to it would be with great pleasure.
Merci d'avance à la personne qui me corrigera.
Paragraphe:
I would have chosen a famous British charity called Oxfam.
Their mission is to fight against poverty in the world.
They receive money from donors, governments and from the sale of goods.
I would love to participate and help because I think that we should help the most deprived and that they too have their chance.
But also because there are a lot of people thanks to Oxfam who are no longer in need and have a stable life. If I could contribute to it would be with great pleasure.
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