bonjour je suis en term ES et j'ai mon oral blanc d'anglais a la rentrée, quelqu'un pourrait-il me dire qi il y a des fautes dans mes intros et me donner des conseils pour la résolutions de celles-ci, s'il vous plait?
Today i’m going to deal with the notion of Places and Forms of Power. Firstly I will explain what I understand behind that: The power is the ability to influences the behaviour of others persons. In order, to live together and the members of the society accept rules and laws. It permite to create social cohesion but also lead to conflicts and tensions.
We can illustrate this notion with the theme “African Americans, from slavery to the white house” because black people want to live and be equal with the white community but this implies conflicts and tensions between this two community.
I’m going to try to answer the question: How African Americans have achieved recognition?
So first, I will reflect on the slave to their skin. And then, I will address the issue of Equality or a piece of equality.
Today i’m going to deal with the notion: The idea of Progress. Firstly I will explain what I understand behind that: It can be defined as an improvement, a development or a change with technical, scientific or social advance which contributes to making the world better.
We can illustrate this notion with the theme “a woman’s world” because the equality between men and women it’s a progress for making a world better. We are all humans that we are a men or women we can have same rights.
I’m going to try to answer the question “to what extent can we say that women have obtained equal rights with men?”
So firstly, I will reflect on inequality always present. And then, I will address the obtaining equality.
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Il est parfait! Mais le probleme c'est que tu dis trop de fois "Firstly". Tu peux changer cette expression par "In the first place".