Bonjour, je voudrais savoir comment vous trouvez mon devoir d'anglais. Si il y a des erreurs n'hesite pas a corrige please c est pour demain. Je dois inventé un superhero, comment il a dote de ces pouvoirs, sa tenu, ces enemies... Il faut que le hero ne soit pas existant.

The name of my Superhero is Beast Flame , her alter ego is Kelly Tomlinson. She is twenty years old. Before she became a superhero , Kelly was an ordinary high-school student. She has dark hair and green eyes. She is very generous and always helps her friends. She is French and lives in Paris.

Her origins :
One day , she received a mysterious package with no name or address. It was an African mask , but it turned out to have unexpected powers. When she puts on the mask she has superpower. Now she protects Paris against criminals , while fighting against the evil plans of Hellbolt who wants to steal her mask.

Her superpowers :
She can jump very high and run faster than Usain Bolt. Elle can also climb on all surfaces. She has the power to control and manipulate fire , for example , she can create fireballs. She can also control animals, so that they obey her orders.

Her outfit :
She wears a black and green bodysuit with an utility belt. She wears the mask. The emblem on her trunk represents an African god.

Her enemy :
The main enemy of Beast Falem is Mr Modest , he is a scientific , who wantS absolutelly to steal the mask. He is tall and his hair is brown. He’s really terrifying.