Bonjour merci de me corriger ce petit texte en anglais si il y a des faute d'orthographe ou compréhension, SANS UTILISER GOOGLE TRADUCTION CAR LES PHRASES NE VEULENT RIEN DIRE ! Merci d'avance! The scene takes place in the living room, during the christmas time because we can see a christmas tree, gifts, a chimney. There are a man lying on the ground, he don't look like at a thief or a criminal. We can see a woman down a flight with a gun, she look like suprised, shoked... I think the man is innocent and his wife arrive for help him, for kill the criminal. We must ask at a private detective to investigate the murder because we have not evidence. I think that the man wanted to go downstairs to open the gifts for Christmas and it's at that moment that he was shot.
When his wife heard this sound she gets off immediatelly with a gun for protect herself.
When she saw his husband lying down in the floor she shouted a cry of surpise.. But She came too late and there was no more criminel.
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lisettess
Pour gifts n'oublie pas le déterminant ! The gifts Ensuite she looks avec un s she shouted a cry elle a crié un crie non il faut dire elle a crié Sinon très bon devoir !
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Ensuite she looks avec un s
she shouted a cry elle a crié un crie non il faut dire elle a crié
Sinon très bon devoir !
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