Ou est-ce que je peux mettre des verbes au préterit- be + ing dans ce texte ( c'est moi qui l'a inventé ) sachant que le préterit be + ing sert à exprimer les circonstances dans lesquelles se déroule l'histoire ? alors que le prétérit sert à évoquer des faits , donner des informations ( j'ai mis quelques verbes entre parenthèses que vous pourrez changez si besoin en préterit be + ing )
My name is Inès, I (became ) a very famous star dancer. My parents (enrolled) me in the very young dance class at the age of four. At first, I (was forced) to do so because of the choice of my parents, especially my mother, who (dreamed )of having a graceful and delicate daughter because she (had) children at the age of 18, so she (put) an end to her career and who (projected) on me his desire to become someone famous. Then over the years, I ( took ) a taste of dance. I (decided) to continue in this way to be a professional dancer to have an exciting and rewarding life. This job (has allowed ) me to meet great people: musicians, conductor, travel around the world: New York, Mouscou and go dancing in the most beautiful ballets. On the other hand, I will not like to make the mistake of my mother, that is, to abandon everything. But I would like to reconcile my professional life and have a family life. Finally, the sentence I can tell you is "to try to find the balance between his job and his private life because both are important ! Having a good job and having children is happiness! So, go after your dreams without regret!
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mamaa06
Bonjour voici les réponses dans l'ordre : Ton texte est tout juste tu n'a rien à changer !! Voila :)
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Lola9999
Si j'ai des choses à changer , c'est trop simple de dire ça.
Lola9999
ce n'est pas possible d'avoir aucune erreur.
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