Bonjour,
Pourriez-vous m'aider en m'indiquant les erreurs que j'aurais pu faire dans mon texte d'anglais et me dire ce que je pourrais améliorer ?
Merci d'avance pour votre aide !

Consignes :

Vous êtes le parent d'un adolescent en rébellion et vous vous sentez désespéré. Écrivez un e-mail à l'émission "World's strictest parents" pour être candidat.
Faites attention à la grammaire, le vocabulaire, les idées, la structure (paragraphes, connecteurs logique).

Voici mon texte :

Hello,
I'm sending this e-mail because I wish to apply to your program. I'm presenting myself: I'm Esteban a father of a 16 years old teenager and I'm desperate because my sons no longer listens to me. He does what he wants. He managed to take control of the house. He does everytime stupidities. I have been seeing see him smoking, drinking and stealing. The other day, I repressed him for his steal and he was violent even dangerous. He has punched his wooden door and has broken him. Since this day I'm afraid of him. In addition, for some time it goes out every night to party with his friends while it is not the weekend. I'm scared for him because I heard from other parents that their teen was starting to taking drugs. I do not want that he is dependent. I could cite otherexamples but would be too long and I think you have a good overview of their situation.
I really need your help!
Thank you for your understanding and hopefully soon.