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I am Rosa Parks( Rosa Louise McCauley) , I was born February 4, 1913 in Tuskegee, Alabama, United States. My father is a carpenter, my mother' is a lteacher. My parents separated when I was very young, and I experienced racism as a child. In my day, whites and blacks didn't have the same rights. As a black person, I am very often discriminated against.
I am a human rights activist and civil rights activist . Actually I fought against racial segregation in the United States, it call me : "Mother of the civil rights movement" by the United States Congress.
On 1st December 1955 in Montgomery, I refused to give up my place to a white woman for this reason who she was arrested by two municipal police officers. She was sentenced on December 5 to pay a fine of $ 10, the equivalent of a day's wages.
I am Rosa Parks (Rosa Louise McCauley) , I was born ON February 4, 1913 in Tuskegee, Alabama, United States. My father WAS a carpenter AND my mother A teacher. My parents GOT separated when I was very young, and I WAS experienced racism as a child. In my day, whites and blacks didn't have the same rights. As a black person, I am very often discriminated.
I WORK AS a human rights activist and civil rights activist . Actually I fought against racial segregation in the United States, I'M COLD : "Mother of the civil rights movement" by the United States Congress.
On December 1st, 1955 in Montgomery, I refused to give up my place to a white woman AND for this reason I was arrested by two municipal officers. I was sentenced on December 5 to pay a fine of $ 10 (the equivalent of a day's wages).
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I am Rosa Parks (Rosa Louise McCauley) and I was born on February 4th, 1913 in Tuskegee, Alabama, in the United States of America. My father was a carpenter and my mother was a teacher. They got separated when I was very young. I experienced racism as a child. In my day, whites and blacks didn't have the same rights. As a result, being a black person myself, I had been very often discriminated against.
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After I grew up, I worked as a human rights activist and a civil rights activist . I fought against racial segregation in the United States and I was even called : "Mother of the civil rights movement" by the United States Congress.
On December 1st, 1955 in Montgomery, I refused to give up my seat to a white woman. Shortly after, I was arrested by two municipal officers and sentenced 4 days later to pay $10 fine, which was the equivalent of a day's wages.
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I am Rosa Parks (Rosa Louise McCauley) , I was born ON February 4, 1913 in Tuskegee, Alabama, United States. My father WAS a carpenter AND my mother A teacher. My parents GOT separated when I was very young, and I WAS experienced racism as a child. In my day, whites and blacks didn't have the same rights. As a black person, I am very often discriminated.
I WORK AS a human rights activist and civil rights activist . Actually I fought against racial segregation in the United States, I'M COLD : "Mother of the civil rights movement" by the United States Congress.
On December 1st, 1955 in Montgomery, I refused to give up my place to a white woman AND for this reason I was arrested by two municipal officers. I was sentenced on December 5 to pay a fine of $ 10 (the equivalent of a day's wages).
IL Y A QUELQUES FAUTES MAIS SINON C"EST BIEN.
On December 1st, 1955 in Montgomery, I refused to give up my seat to a white woman. Shortly after, I was arrested by two municipal officers and sentenced 4 days later to pay $10 fine, which was the equivalent of a day's wages.