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On the other hand, mexican immigration is still today a big issue in the United States. The border between Mexico and the USA is the most crossed over in the world. The American’s government wants to make the border more secure and uneasy to cross. There are millions of attempts crossing the border every year and it develops drug deals and cartels. Some agents have been aggressed or killed in the line of duty. So the president Donald Trump has decided to build a wall to prevent immigrants from entering the USA illegally.Mexican people leave Mexico to have a higher standard of living with med facilities and to have a better future and an education for their children. Furthermore, Mexico is struck by unemployment. The USA appears as a land of opportunities. They cross the Rio Grande thanks to smugglers, they are piled in miserable trucks and they can’t An other changement to note is the emergence of a cheap workforce. When they reach the US, the Mexican immigrants are doomed to do painful and menial jobs low skilled and with low wages like dishwasher, gardener or cleaning lady. Some people think that Mexicans are taking away jobs from American citizens but Americans workers would not automatically accept to work in such conditions.


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