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Hi Aaron!
I think we've all been through hard times, right ? The times when you feel awful. When you think something is impossible to do, and you just wanna give up. But you are just as smart as any other kid!! You are greater than you think. So, you must still working, and ready to show everyone that you're going to realise your dream! In difficult times, I looked at my parents, at my friends, and I realized that thanks to their determination they will realize their dreams .You imagine if all these stars had abandoned because they were poor. He couldn't have succeeded if they had abandoned.Imagine, maybe if you don't give up, that you keep following your dreams, maybe you'll succeed. And it's worth taking the chance, don't you think ? And maybe, maybe one day, even you will become the person someone looks up to! So don't you ever give up your dreams!
Hi Aaron!
I think we've all been through hard times, right ? The times when you feel awful. When you think something is impossible to do, and you just wanna give up. But you are just as smart as any other kid!! You are greater than you think. So, you must still working, and ready to show everyone that you're going to realise your dream! In difficult times, I looked at my parents, at my friends, and I realized that thanks to their determination they will realize their dreams .You imagine if all these stars had abandoned because they were poor. He couldn't have succeeded if they had abandoned.Imagine, maybe if you don't give up, that you keep following your dreams, maybe you'll succeed. And it's worth taking the chance, don't you think ? And maybe, maybe one day, even you will become the person someone looks up to! So don't you ever give up your dreams!
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Hi Aaron!
I think we've all been through hard times, right ? The times when you feel awful. When you think something is impossible to do, and you just want to give up. But you are just as smart as any other kid!! You are greater than you think. So, you must still work, and ready to show everyone that you're going to realize your dream! In difficult times, I looked at my parents, at my friends, and I realized that thanks to their determination they will realize their dreams. You imagine if all these stars had abandoned because they were poor. They couldn't have succeeded if they had abandoned. Imagine, maybe if you don't give up, that you keep following your dreams, maybe you'll succeed. And it's worth taking the chance, don't you think ? And maybe, maybe one day, even you will become the person someone looks up to! So don't you ever give up your dreams!
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Ton texte est vraiment bien je trouve. J'ai corrigé quelques trucs (souligné), après je sais pas si il y a d'autres fautes ou pas.