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Pouvez vous s'il vous plait corriger mon texte en anglais ? Merci de votre aide :
THX 1138 : I want us to finally go away far from here so that we can live our free love. I do not have the force anymore to support this unhealthy society and unfortunatly so controled by technology
.LUH 3147 : I am sorry, but if we leave, we will have a lot of trouble and I don't want to live that. I am sure that the robot-policemans are listening to our conversation with the help of cameras.
THX 11 : Calm down, if we have to stay here, we will never be able to do anything! Can you imagine ? Having to stay this way our entire life! I think we should leave this underground society!LUH 3147 : Yes, what will happen to us after? I am afraid.THX : Don't be scared, we have the right to look for a better life.We deserve peace and hapiness. I will always be here with you, no matter what.
LUH : You're right! But it won't be an easy mission to escape from here because since we live in this underground society, we are submissed to a totalitary power and completely invisible.
THX : Yes, i know. But I can't go on like this, living in this horrible prison. Everyday we are controled by machines, with repression and violence. We are mistreated, we live under sedatives, obligated drugs and chemical treatments, and all of this in a perfectly monochrome world. We are considered as robots. We have to eat everyday some sort of little sponges, and to stay alive, we have to swallow red and yellow pills! I can't stand it anymore!
LUH : But where could we start a new life outside, my love ? Earth has gone threw a lot of troubles.
THX : I honestly never thought of this, since I've only been thinking about one thing: leaving! LUH : We should stay here. Even if we are bald and if we don't have our own familynames, neither own names and so on our own personnality, we are at least feeded and hosted in this white prison.
THX : I bet you ! Stop saying such dumb things! Be brave, Even more than you are today! I promise you a better life.
LHX : How can tou promise it? They even have the mental controle here, so you can't be stronger or more clever than all the people finding themselves here. I remind you that they can hypnotise anyone!
THX : I know, love. Everything is white here. We are all in white. But it is actually a real hell. We haved sinned, but we are sharing our life space with demons! Even a religion is imposed to all of us, wether we like it or not. It's a true dictatorship here. And among all the prohibitions we impose us, there is one I can not bear anymore.
LHX : Really? Which one?
THX : The one that doesn't let me be freely in love with you. Do you realize?We can't even have feelings for someone. And if we do, We have to be juged for it in a judgment! Even love has become illegal here! I can't stand it anymore, it's way too hard. No human contacts, neither social lives. This world doesn't have a soul anymore, it's a dead world...
LHX : It's the case for me too,because i love you too. It is very hard to live without being allowed to love you. But you know that life is not a pleasent thing for all humans out here. It would be unfair to leave and let them here in this hell.
THX : You know, at this point, thinking about the others won't bring anything. We have to focus on finding our hapiness. I dream of having a family with you, of spending the rest of my life in your company.
LHX : Spending the rest of my days with you is my biggest dream too. And if you love me, I am ready to say goodbye to this diabolical and horrible society!
THX : In this case... (At this moment, the checkpoint made them fall into hypnosis, using a sharp sound wave)
Pouvez vous s'il vous plait corriger mon texte en anglais ? Merci de votre aide :
THX 1138 : I want us to finally go away far from here so that we can live our free love. I do not have the force anymore to support this unhealthy society and unfortunatly so controled by technology
.LUH 3147 : I am sorry, but if we leave, we will have a lot of trouble and I don't want to live that. I am sure that the robot-policemans are listening to our conversation with the help of cameras.
THX 11 : Calm down, if we have to stay here, we will never be able to do anything! Can you imagine ? Having to stay this way our entire life! I think we should leave this underground society!LUH 3147 : Yes, what will happen to us after? I am afraid.THX : Don't be scared, we have the right to look for a better life.We deserve peace and hapiness. I will always be here with you, no matter what.
LUH : You're right! But it won't be an easy mission to escape from here because since we live in this underground society, we are submissed to a totalitary power and completely invisible.
THX : Yes, i know. But I can't go on like this, living in this horrible prison. Everyday we are controled by machines, with repression and violence. We are mistreated, we live under sedatives, obligated drugs and chemical treatments, and all of this in a perfectly monochrome world. We are considered as robots. We have to eat everyday some sort of little sponges, and to stay alive, we have to swallow red and yellow pills! I can't stand it anymore!
LUH : But where could we start a new life outside, my love ? Earth has gone threw a lot of troubles.
THX : I honestly never thought of this, since I've only been thinking about one thing: leaving! LUH : We should stay here. Even if we are bald and if we don't have our own familynames, neither own names and so on our own personnality, we are at least feeded and hosted in this white prison.
THX : I bet you ! Stop saying such dumb things! Be brave, Even more than you are today! I promise you a better life.
LHX : How can tou promise it? They even have the mental controle here, so you can't be stronger or more clever than all the people finding themselves here. I remind you that they can hypnotise anyone!
THX : I know, love. Everything is white here. We are all in white. But it is actually a real hell. We haved sinned, but we are sharing our life space with demons! Even a religion is imposed to all of us, wether we like it or not. It's a true dictatorship here. And among all the prohibitions we impose us, there is one I can not bear anymore.
LHX : Really? Which one?
THX : The one that doesn't let me be freely in love with you. Do you realize?We can't even have feelings for someone. And if we do, We have to be juged for it in a judgment! Even love has become illegal here! I can't stand it anymore, it's way too hard. No human contacts, neither social lives. This world doesn't have a soul anymore, it's a dead world...
LHX : It's the case for me too,because i love you too. It is very hard to live without being allowed to love you. But you know that life is not a pleasent thing for all humans out here. It would be unfair to leave and let them here in this hell.
THX : You know, at this point, thinking about the others won't bring anything. We have to focus on finding our hapiness. I dream of having a family with you, of spending the rest of my life in your company.
LHX : Spending the rest of my days with you is my biggest dream too. And if you love me, I am ready to say goodbye to this diabolical and horrible society!
THX : In this case... (At this moment, the checkpoint made them fall into hypnosis, using a sharp sound wave)
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Pour le premier paragraphe c'est mieux: I want us to finally get away from here and live our free love. I no longer have the strength to support this unhealthy and unfortunately so technologically controlled society.
Pour le deuxième paragraphe : I'm sorry, but if we leave, we'll have a lot of problems and I don't want to go through that. I'm sure the robot police officers are listening to our conversation with cameras.
Pour le troisième : Relax, if we have to stay here, there's nothing we can ever do! Can you imagine? Having to stay like this all our lives! I think we should leave this underground society! LUH 3147: Yes, what will happen to us after that? I'm afraid.THX: Don't be afraid, we have the right to seek a better life. We deserve peace and happiness. I'll always be here with you, no matter what.
Pour le cinquième : Yes, I know. But I can't go on like this, living in this horrible prison. Every day, we are controlled by machines, with repression and violence. We are mistreated, we live under sedation, drugs and compulsory chemical treatments, and all this in a perfectly monochrome world. We are considered robots. We have to eat a kind of little sponge every day, and to stay alive, we have to swallow red and yellow pills! I can't take it anymore!
Pour le sixième et septième :But where could we start a new life outside, my love? The Earth has been in a lot of trouble.
THX: Honestly, I never thought about it, since I only thought about one thing: leaving! We should stay here. Even if we are bald and have no family name, no surname, no first name, no personality, we are at least fed and housed in this white prison.
THX: I bet you! Stop saying such stupid things! Be brave, even more so than you are today! I promise you a better life.
LHX: How can you promise that? They even have mental control here, so you can't be stronger or smarter than all the people who end up here. I remind you that they can hypnotize anyone!
THX: I know, my love. Everything is white here. We are all in white. But it's actually a real hell. We have sinned, but we share our living space with demons! Even a religion is imposed on all of us, whether we like it or not. This is a real dictatorship here. And among all the prohibitions we impose on ourselves, there is one that I can no longer tolerate.
LHX: Really? Which one?
THX: The one who doesn't let me be freely in love with you. Do you realize that? You can't even have feelings for someone. And if we do, we must be judged for it in a judgment! Even love has become illegal here! I can't take it anymore, it's way too hard. No human contact, no social life. This world has no soul, it's a dead world.....
LHX: It's the same for me too, because I love you too. It's very difficult to live without being allowed to love you. But you know that life is not a pleasant thing for all humans here. It would be unfair to leave them here in this hellhole.
THX: You know, at this point, thinking about others will not help. We must focus on our happiness. I dream of having a family with you, of spending the rest of my life in your company.
LHX: Spending the rest of my life with you is also my biggest dream. And if you love me, I'm ready to say goodbye to this evil and horrible society!
THX: In this case.... (At that moment, the checkpoint made them fall into hypnosis, using a high-pitched sound wave)
Explications : Ton texte n'est pa faux mais ce n'est pas un anglais très bon.