Bonjour , Pouvez vous svp corriger mon texte en anglais svp ? ( formulations de phrases , conjugaisons .. ) Merci Dear Mr. President , My name is Wendy, although I am black, I come from Albama, I contact you to ask you why there is so much injustice between simple humans? I'm black, yes, I hope you won't be too angry for having written you a letter of expression. I am very angry! Because last week, I learned that heavily armed white people were spared while colored people who had no trace of weapon have been shot but what an upside down world! Are you a real president? I don't really think so because you let a great majority of your people die: African-American people like me! But, why so much hatred towards us, for decades already? We are all human, all equal! It is incomprehensible! Long live diversity! Luckily, there are different human beings! Fortunately we are not clones! Long live racialized people, black people, white people like you, Asians, North Africans etc., Long live all citizens of the Earth! Are you going to give you our justice of being human ? What are you waiting for to recruit dignified and fair policemen ? All this because of the color of our skin! Really, it's really stupid of you! Incredibly stupid! I'm tired of seeing communities of black humans and groups of white humans! Let's mingle! Let's make mixed race kids! And maybe that will stop racist crimes because it will be when human beings will have some of your "white blood" that horrible term that you unfortunately often say!!!! I say All the humans of the world lives matter! Because when we love this world, we respect everyone ! Long live all the citizens of the Earth! I respect you, I call you by "dear Mr. President" after all that you have done, because I owe you respect because you are a human like me and to forgive you as a Human! Here is the true missiob of the humans! Be benevolent towards us! The true meaning of life! Isn't it? If not, it is that the fools will never change their minds !
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Dear Mr. President , my name is Wendy, I am a black woman (man?) from Alabama. I contact you to ask why there are so much injustices between simple human beings?
Yes, I am black, I hope you're not too angry that I am writing a letter of expression to you. I am very angry! Because last week, I learned that heavily armed white people were spared while colored people who had no trace of a single weapon have been shot. ((Tu parle de quel evenement? Ils ont été tué pourquoi? Tu parles des injustices ou les personnes noire se font tuer alors qu'elles ne portent pas d'armes en général ou durant une manif par exemple?))
Are you a real president? I don't really think so because you let a great majority of your people die: African-American people like me! But, why so much hatred towards us, for decades already? We all are human, all equal! It is incomprehensible! Long live diversity! Luckily, there are different human beings! Fortunately we are not clones! Long live racialized people, black people, white people like you, Asians, North Africans etc., Long live all citizens of the Earth! Are you going to give us our justice for being human beings ? What are you waiting for to recruit dignified and fair policemen ?
All of these injustices because of skin color! Really, it's really stupid coming from you! Incredibly stupid! I'm tired of seeing communities of black humans and groups of white humans! Let's mingle! Let's make mixed race kids! And maybe that will stop racist crimes. Because we'll have some of your "white blood", that horrible term that you unfortunately often say!!!!
I say All humans of the world lives matter! Because when we love this world, we respect everyone ! Long live all the citizens of the Earth! Ig ive you respect, I call you by "dear Mr. President" after all you've done, because I owe you respect; Because you are a human like me and to forgive you as a Human! Here is the true mission of the human kind! Be benevolent towards us! The true meaning of life! Isn't it? If not, it is that the fools will never change their minds !
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