Bonjour pouvez vous vérifier si il y a des erreurs sur mon paragraphe sur les icebergs, c'est pour mardi :

Sujet : réfléchir à un objet, animal, lieu en voie d'exctinction, les raisons et les conséquences, le narrateur et à qui il s'adresse.

un have + en, un passif et un used to minimum.


The melting of iceberg

A big block of ice has been removed of Arctic’s floe !
This iceberg which the capital of French in four copies. The scientists are worried because the big block can touch Canada islands.
Why icebergs break off of floe ?
The scientists used to think the Arctic didn’t use to break away. But with the global warming, the melting of iceberg is speeded up.
This is also due to sunshine, water and air convection and the wave erosion.
If the man doesn’t react at this future catastrophe, the results could be the rise of oceans and seas or the threat of global warming. It could be a big natural disaster so men must respond as soon as possible risking their own lives.


Merci d'avance :)