Bonjour quelqu'un balaise en anglais pourrait me corriger ce texte svp c'est tres urgent . merci d'avance :
The first week of the holiday I did not do anything special, I slept a lot but the second week I left with my parents in our mobile homes, my brother and my cousin were there, we spent a good week, Did not get very hot. All week long, my cousin and I were strolling on the beach but we also did a lot of sport, (football, ping pong etc ...) we were also in town, that day we walked a lot in the evening we were tired . The landemain, we got up and at noon we went to the pool and had a great time, the holiday was too short
The first week of the holiday I did not do anything special, I slept a lot but the second week I left with my parents in our mobile homes, my brother and my cousin were there, we spent a good week, Did not get very hot. All week long, my cousin and I were strolling on the beach but we also did a lot of sport, (football, ping pong etc ...) we were also in town, that day we walked a lot in the evening we were tired . The landemain, we got up and at noon we went to the pool and had a great time, the holiday was too short
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Sport-------> Sports
Il me semble que lendemain en Anglais est utilisé comme nous utilisons "what" comme expression de la surprise, tu devrais plutôt utiliser "the next day".
The Holiday was------> The holidays were
Je comprends pas quand tu dis "I left with my parents in our mobile homes".. Tu veux dire quoi?
Et c'est plutôt "we spent some good time" enfin je pense que tu as bon quand même.. Par contre la fin de ta phrase est mauvaise, tu ne peux pas dire "did not get very hot" puisqu'il n'y a aucun sujet.. Ce serait plutôt "It wasn't very hot outside" (il ne faisait pas très chaud dehors)
Et aussi "We were also in town" n'est pas très bon, ça veut dire "nous étions en ville" et c'est plutôt "nous sommes allés en ville" qui est "we went into town"
Et après, précise un jour, parce que "that day" c'est trop vague.. Par exemple dis plutôt "Wednesday afternoon, we walked a lot then in the evening we were tired"
"the landemain" c'est pas bon xD
C'est "The next day" et fais attention, les vacances sont au pluriel donc c'est "The holidays were too short" :)