Bonjour quelqu'un de fort en anglais pourrait-on vérifier mon devoir , si c'est compréhensible ou dois-je changer quelques mots etcc voici mon devoir : I am going to introduce you to the movie Vertigo by Alfred Hitchcock.This is a thrillera crime story and it's one of Hitchcockis masterprice. The scripwriters de Alec Correl and Samuel Taylor and the mains actors urę James Stewart and Kim Nowak Vertigo was shoot on May 1958. The film is about a policeman suffering from vertigo sees one of his old friends again because he saw his colleague die. The latter asks him to inverstigatę his wife Madaleine who has suicidal tendencies I choose this film because there is a lot of suspense and because it is one of my favourite films. Frankly. I advise you to go and see this film because, despite its seniority, there is a lot of suspense throughout the film.
I am going to introduce you to the movie Vertigo by Alfred Hitchcock.This is a thrillera crime story and it's one of Hitchcockis actrice The scripwriters de Alec Correl and Samuel Taylor and the mains actors urę James Stewart and Kim Nowak Vertigo was shoot on May 1958. The film is about a policeman suffering from vertigo sees one of his old friends again because he saw his colleague die. The latter asks him to inverstigatę his wife Madaleine who has suicidal tendencies I choose this film because there is a lot of suspense and because it is one of my favourite films. Frankly. I advise you to go and see this film because, despite its seniority, there is a lot of suspense throughout the film.
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I am going to introduce you to the movie Vertigo by Alfred Hitchcock.This is a thrillera crime story and it's one of Hitchcockis actrice The scripwriters de Alec Correl and Samuel Taylor and the mains actors urę James Stewart and Kim Nowak Vertigo was shoot on May 1958. The film is about a policeman suffering from vertigo sees one of his old friends again because he saw his colleague die. The latter asks him to inverstigatę his wife Madaleine who has suicidal tendencies I choose this film because there is a lot of suspense and because it is one of my favourite films. Frankly. I advise you to go and see this film because, despite its seniority, there is a lot of suspense throughout the film.
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