Bonjour quelqu'un pourrez me corriger mes erreurs en anglais sachant que dans la consigne on devait utiliser le passé simple et utiliser plusieurs fois le superlatif pour expliquer un concert merci: In december last years , i went to paris and i saw Coldplay in a concert. The band was the most funner. The audience was the most fabulous and the crowd supported the band. The fans cheered .The atmosphere was the most better and everybody had fun. The stage was beautiful. I liked the music because it was most funner. I had a autograph in back stage and i spoke with the band. The guitarists was the most beautiful,the bass player was the most funner and the drummer was the most nicest
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luna595
Cc j'ai modifier un peut le texte In december last years , i went to paris and I had seen Coldplay in concert The group was the most fabulous and the crowd supported the group.The atmosphere was the best and everyone had fun. The scene was beautiful. I liked the music because it was the most fun. I had an autograph to step back and I spoke with the group.the guitarist and the drummer was the most beautiful
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naomicryan
Je suis anglaise et Le "i" Il doit etre en capitale Dans La phrase.C'est pas Que au début de la phrase que Je en anglais a une capital .
naomicryan
J'ai modifier le texte Avec des differents mot car il ya des mots qui faisaient pas de sens et j'ai corrigée d'autre fautes: Last year,In december I went to paris and I saw Coldplay in a concert. The band was incredible.The audience was huge and the crowd supported the band. The fans cheered a lot .The atmosphere was amazing and everybody had fun. The stage was beautiful. I mostly enjoyed the music because it was Fun.I had autographs signed from the band back stage and I spoke with them. The guitarists were the most handsome,the bass player was the most fun to hangout with and the drummer was the nicest.
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In december last years , i went to paris and I had seen Coldplay in concert The group was the most fabulous and the crowd supported the group.The atmosphere was the best and everyone had fun. The scene was beautiful. I liked the music because it was the most fun. I had an autograph to step back and I spoke with the group.the guitarist and the drummer was the most beautiful