Bonjour voila j'ai besoin à mon avis de plusieurs corrections MERCI The detective stories are fictions in which there is a murder. The detective is the man who will find the murderer The detective may be a professional or not. The most famous detective are Sherlock Holmes and Hercule poirot The detective stories can be novels and movies but we will talk the books I go you explain why I like the detective stories because there is the two points of view There is a lot of suspense in the detective stories We must think about the clues to find the murderer but we rarely find because the writer traps us. Everyone always suspects somebody who is innocent the detective find the guilty. So the detective always find clues that nobody has seen There is a lot of suspense in the detective stories, but what is interesting, is the murder The suspense created an atmosphere mysterious . we search the murderer like the detective and even if we don’t find, we are fascinated by the history In stories detective we can learn during we read because the detective uses policemen’s expressions Moreover we are always surprised when the detective find the murderer. Finally we can being a detective with detective stories and it’s interesting. In conclusion I think that detective stories look like reality even if the writer adds a atmospher
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Sdu61je mets les changements en gras ;) Detective stories are fictions in which there is a murder. The detective is the man who tries to find the murderer. The detective may be a professional or not. The most famous detectives are Sherlock Holmes and Hercule Poirot. Detective stories can be novels and movies but we will talk about the books. I'm gonna explain you why I like (the a enlever) detective stories because there are(the a enlever) two points of view There is a lot of suspense in (the a enlever) detective stories. We must think about the clues to find the murderer but we rarely find because the writer traps us. Everyone always suspects somebody who is innocent and the detective find the guilty. So the detective always find clues that nobody has seen. There is a lot of suspense in (the a enlever) detective stories, but what is interesting is the murder. The suspense created a mysterious atmosphere. we search the murderer like the detective and even if we don’t find him, we are fascinated by the story. In detective stories we can learn while we read because the detective uses policemen’s expressions. Moreover, we are always surprised when the detective finds the murderer. Finally we can be a detective with detective stories and it’s interesting. In conclusion I think that detective stories look like reality even if the writer adds an atmosphere. Bonne journée !
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Detective stories are fictions in which there is a murder.
The detective is the man who tries to find the murderer.
The detective may be a professional or not.
The most famous detectives are Sherlock Holmes and Hercule Poirot.
Detective stories can be novels and movies but we will talk about the books.
I'm gonna explain you why I like (the a enlever) detective stories because there are (the a enlever) two points of view
There is a lot of suspense in (the a enlever) detective stories.
We must think about the clues to find the murderer but we rarely find because the writer traps us. Everyone always suspects somebody who is innocent and the detective find the guilty.
So the detective always find clues that nobody has seen.
There is a lot of suspense in (the a enlever) detective stories, but what is interesting is the murder.
The suspense created a mysterious atmosphere. we search the murderer like the detective and even if we don’t find him, we are fascinated by the story.
In detective stories we can learn while we read because the detective uses policemen’s expressions. Moreover, we are always surprised when the detective finds the murderer. Finally we can be a detective with detective stories and it’s interesting.
In conclusion I think that detective stories look like reality even if the writer adds an atmosphere.
Bonne journée !