Bonjour vous pouvez me corriger mon CV pour mon devoir d'anglais
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in response to your job announcement for shop assistant. I am 23 years old and I have been unemployed since 2013. I have already worked in a bakery and also on a book shop since 2 years. I would be great for the job Thank you for your time and attention. Sincerely,
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Eléonore5
Dear Sir or Mrs, I am writting in reply to your job annoucement for be a shop assistant. I am 23 years old, and I've been employed since 2013. (dans quoi ? car on ne sait pas, rajoute le) I've already worked in a bakery and also in a book shop for two years. I would be nice for this job. Thank you for your time and your attention. Sincerly,
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sedefavci
Dans la 2ème j'ai ecrit que j'ai ete au chômage depuis 2013
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I am writting in reply to your job annoucement for be a shop assistant.
I am 23 years old, and I've been employed since 2013. (dans quoi ? car on ne sait pas, rajoute le)
I've already worked in a bakery and also in a book shop for two years.
I would be nice for this job.
Thank you for your time and your attention.
Sincerly,