Bonjours, pouriez-vous me corriger mon expression écrite en anglais je dois la rendre pour demain.


Hello my name is ****** ******* . I'm ** years old. I have brown eyes. I don't wear glasses.
I have long brown hair. Four years ago I lived in Paris and now I live in Marseille. I have a sister and a brother. My dad works in a shop and my mom is a secretary. I have two dogs.

When I lived in Paris I was in a basketball club but now I'm in a golf club. this is my favorite sport. By cons, I don't like to stay all day in the sun. Al is often bad I do not have the opportunity to play golf outdoors.

In my school, during recess, I like talking with my friends. Because in class we cannot talk. When I have free time I like to listen to music and watch series by eating chips in my bedroom because on my desk there is a computer.

And tell me what is your passion, how old are you, what do you like to do. I hope we will have common passions.


MERCIII : )