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Bonjous , je viens de terminer une tache finale en anglais qui était de faire une sorte de biographie de la personne en expliquant ses exploits .Je suis pas sur de l'orthographe et de l'expression pourriez vous m'aidez svp ?

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Jacksterada Il y a des erreurs, peux tu faire un copier / coller de ton texte pour que je puisse les corriger ;)

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Mal850 apollo 11 was going to be hard but he didn’t give up and he went beyond his limits by taking up the challenge of the humanity to go and walk on Moon in 1969 and he managed to pilot the Lunar Module to the moon's surface and over there he pronounced his famous sentence « That ‘s one small step for a man but one giant leap for mankind».Neil Armstrong became a world hero,he was decorated by 17 countries and he finished his career as teacher but he died in 2012.

Mal850 je suis obliger de le coller comme sa car il faut entre 2 et 500 caractères pour envoyer des messages

Jacksterada ok pas de souci, je corrige !

Jacksterada premier paragrapje: Neil Armstrong is considered to be an American hero because he was the first human who walked on the Moon. He was born on August 5th, 1930 in Wapakoneta, Ohio. Before being an astronaut, he was determined to obtain his pilot license in 1945. Then in 1951, he participated in the Korean war where he did 78 missions. He flew over Korea for a total of 121 hours and received many rewards such as the Gold star. This man was remarkable and bold. He got an engineering degree in 1955.

Jacksterada He didn’t stop there to fulfill his objectives, the same year he decided to join the Nasa where he overcame many obstacles who allowed him to have many record like being the first American civilian in space and the first to successfully dock two vehicles in space during the Gemini 8’s mission.

Jacksterada During Apollo 11’s mission, to train himself (pas très Claire) he took a LLRV but the LLRV exploded. He managed to get out of the device at the last second. Armstrong was courageous to take this risk on Earth.

Mal850 Merci beaucoup , j'avait pas attention pour des petites fautes comme les articles

Jacksterada Apollo 11 was going to be hard but he didn’t give up. He went beyond his limits by facing the humanity’s challenge of 1969 walking on the Moon. He managed to pilot the Lunar Module to the moon's surface and over there he pronounced his famous sentence « That’s one small step for a man but one giant leap for mankind». Neil Armstrong became a world hero, he was decorated by 17 countries and he finished his career as teacher and died in 2012.

Jacksterada Bravo pour ton travail qd mm, je constate que tu as fait l'effort de le faire ;)

Mal850 Merci