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The town of Bejaâd was on Wednesday with the launch of the annual Moussem festivities of Saint Sidi Bouabid Charki, founder of the Zaouïa Charkaouia. The first day of this religious and cultural ceremony was marked by the procession of offerings which consists of the presentation of the Kesswa dedicated to the mausoleum of Sidi Bouabid Charki. This procession, a tradition organized annually by Chorfas Charkayouine, crossed the main arteries of the city before arriving at the mausoleum. Placed under the sign "Human development", this Moussem which continued until Sunday was organized by the Municipal Council of Bejaâd, in coordination with the province of Khouribga. The first day was punctuated by fantasia shows at the Sidi Al Ghazouani Square, and handicraft exhibitions next to the station. The second day was marked by the offering of the sacrifice "Taârguiba", specific to the tribes of the Smaâlas, in addition to sports tournaments, artistic competitions and shows and the presentation of the prizes and presents to the winners of the various competitions organized on this occasion.
The second day was marked by the offering of the sacrifice "Taârguiba", specific to the tribes of the Smaâlas, with that there were sports tournaments, artistic compétitions, shows and the presentation of prizes and presents to the winners of the various competitions organized for this occasion.
J'ai modifié quelques mots de liaison sinon ton texte est trop formel et assez lourd à la lecture mais c'est du bon travail, félicitations ! :)
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The second day was marked by the offering of the sacrifice "Taârguiba", specific to the tribes of the Smaâlas, with that there were sports tournaments, artistic compétitions, shows and the presentation of prizes and presents to the winners of the various competitions organized for this occasion.
J'ai modifié quelques mots de liaison sinon ton texte est trop formel et assez lourd à la lecture mais c'est du bon travail, félicitations ! :)