Bonsoir c'est URGENT pourriez m'aider pour faire une meilleure traduction pour mon devoir sur Banksy merci d'avance.


Voici la traduction que j'ai faite mais étant du mot à mot français anglais elle est loin d'être bien:
The real name of Bansksy is Robert Banks or Robin Cunningham, he is one of the English urban artists among the most secret. He would have been born in 1974, around of Bristol in United Kingdom.
He was a member of the group of graffiti artists Of Bristol DryBreadZ Crew ( DBZ). In 2010, he takes out a movie Summits the wall!
Banksy is an artist at the same time committed and funny. Very early, he combines the technique of the stencil and the Writing. The artist uses his art, funnily, as a medium of communication to declare his dissatisfaction to the grave facts of society (war, capitalism, famine) . He promotes the freedom and the insubordination which comes true in the street to have the widest possible audience The girl and the soldier is a graffiti made by means of stencils. This work presents a girl searching a soldier echoing the ambient political context. The characters are stereotyped the soldier would symbolize the military oppression and the girl, the oppressed civilians. By disarming the soldier, the girl, Banksy seems to show the right for the childhood, for the innocence. The fact that she is dressed in a pink dress is caricatural, by this gesture Banksy indicates probably that it is not that a girl, but that all the children are concerned by this right for the innocence. Besides, the soldier also carries the military caricatural attributes and as for the girl, we do not see the faces.
This paint sends back to the political context where the searches made by armed forces on the civilians are daily and systematic. Translating the désaroi of the passers-by who have to comply with the searches, this image joins well in the modernity. We can think that this scene echos the frustration of the civilians not to be able to give tit for tat to those who search them, it eveals a fantasy, in that respect, This scene thus satiric because it is every girl who searches the soldat.on big can even go so far as to say that by putting the weapon behind her, the girl takes away the first argument of the serviceman: his weapon. Deprived, the surprised serviceman would be passive. Banksy thus uses of symbolism, of what he probably saw and of the fact that he probably called out to him "to summarize" the situation with two only characters.
However, a faintness can arise of this conversely from balance of power. The girl takes the power, and would not it already have lost its innocence to be brought to disarm herself a soldier? Aware of the violence, does it really belong to her to react? What make the adults? Where are they? These questions are put to the passers-by. Besides, the soldier is passive while he could very well not accept it. He is allowed affect, this report of body leads a rather violent intrusion, it feels him. The machine-gun placed in the back of the scene, stands and seems unloaded as emptied of its potential of violence.
This conversely balance of power call back the photo taken during the repression of the Spring of Beijing in 1989 when a student makes arrest a tank by putting itself in front of.
I chose this work because it shows an engagegement against the war and a support with the bruised popoulatiolns. Yet we know that we live in a world a world where the war is daily in certain populations. I thus find important that artists make a commitment against the war because having become "usual" the media do not speak about it any more and it is important that we speak about it to make the people react.