Bonjour, voici ce que j'aurais ecrit

I've heard of other people wanting to be someone they're not. Maybe to become popular, maybe to become smart and pretty, maybe to get their parents to love them more. Almost everyone wants to be someone else, to be like someone, whether the popular girl in your class, the smart person who won the spelling bee last week, or the artsy boy who draws pictures so beautiful they make you want to cry.

But think about it. If you were that someone in another lifetime, you would want to be more like another person. It's a vicious cycle, when you want to be someone you're not.Then you achieve it, and you want to be someone else better. In the end, you've become a totally different person from who you were before, and you realize maybe you were better off liking who you were before.

So don't try to copy them. Just be yourself, and everything will go fine. I don't mean don't change your habits, don't try to not be lazy. I mean don't copy their style because you can make your own,

J'espere que ca aide :), j'ai mal compris?