bonsoir, j'ai devoir d'anglais ou je dois comparer ma ville idéale avec la ville ou j'habite alors pouvez vous me corriger svp

in my ideal city, there would be beach and amusement park as in the city where i live there is not but there are water park and shopping centre. in my perfect city, there would be stadium and no litter as in the city where i live ther is not but there are gymnasium for play sports, publics transports, school, forest, greens spaces and bicycle path.