Bonsoir, j'ai un devoir maison en anglais. Pouvez vous me corriger mes fautes de grammaire s'il vous plaît ? Merci d'avance

In our Chevrolet Bel Air we started driving through the city . As soon as we entered the city, we saw the Michigan Central Station, the Detroit station. The one from which we left. We were very surprised because it was abandoned. She had been ravaged by a fire. Today, she was in the middle of nowhere, useless and unoccupied when she had welcomed many travelers and made the city attractive. Then, we crossed many deserted streets and we recognized with much difficulty the famous Theater Michigan. It had become a car park sheltered in ruins. The bright front signs were out, the doors were closed. It reminded us of all the plays we went to watch. This theater was the symbol of the glory of Detroit, an artistic and cultural city. It could have been "the largest theater in the West," but it has become the symbol of the city's decline! We stopped for a few minutes to contemplate the disaster. We were very nostalgic. This magnificent building had a lot of style with its impressive architecture reminiscent of Italy. We had a feeling of regret for not having spent more time there. He had hosted movie legends. We restarted and shot in a big boulevard. We passed by the Lee Plaza Hotel. Like the train station, it was still there with its 15 floors but closed, empty. Under the front door, drug addicts were refugees there. The restaurants nearby were razed. It looked like a battlefield. There were tables, abandoned furniture. It seemed to a stranger that this area of the city was very lively and lively he would not have believed us. We looked at each other sadly. The city had changed so much during our absence. Then we went around a field and we saw directly ... our school! Jane Cooper Elementary School! Everything around was shaved. The windows of the classes were broken, young people found themselves in front to skateboard. They were in the place where we were meeting with our friends for recess. We did not have tears in our eyes. We were not disappointed by this silence in the city that was happy. The city was dead! We drove and met the seven most famous buildings in the city. They had been renovated by General Motors, the car company. This reminded us of the Chevrolet Bel Air, the Golden Age of Detroit. We read "G.M Renaissance Center". The buildings were of a modern and impressive height. One was even rocket shaped as to symbolize a new economic start for the company and ... for the city ! Like every city, Detroit has a story. However, we think that will allow a better start.