Bonjour/Bonsoir,

J'aimerai beaucoup avoir de l'aide sur mon devoir :
Raconter ses dernières vacances en anglais en dialogue téléphonique (travail à 2 donc)

Voici ce que nous avons fait mais nous cherchons une fin originale pour conclure le devoir :

- 077 5329 7152
- Hi, what’s going on?
- Hi you, nothing is going on… How were your holidays?
- I went abroad, more precisely to United States…
- How long?
- I stayed there for one week
- And what did you do?
- My parents wanted to rent a car for make the tour of the city and I took a lot of photos. It was a hive of activity and we did an excursion for to go see dolphins, turtles and of harmless sharks.
- But still ?
- We had dinner in very good restaurants, we met a lot of people and the hotel staff was very nice but my mother spent a lot of money. Everything went well and I would have preferred to stay longer.
- I would have liked to be in your place ! Lucky !
- Yes ! And you ? Where'd you leave ?
- Me, I went with my friends at Porto Rico. We booked a hotel face to the sea. The first days, we decided to spend our time doing nothing.
- Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait... Sorry to cut you but... you didn't do anything ?
- Humm... Yes and no... let me finish, you will understand...
- Ok, explains
- So, I was saying... The weather was beautiful there. But after a while we were tired of doing nothing so we went sightseeing and shopping. People there are like the sun of their country, so warm and so welcoming ! We went tot the villa of a friend's parents for our last day. It was cool ! We had such a great fun. I will never forget these Porto Rican holidays !
- Oh ok, I would have liked to be with you !
- ...
Et à partir de là on aimerai conclure...

Donc, est-ce que le texte est juste ?
Et quel fin mettre ?

Merci d'avance