Bonsoir. pouvez vous m'aider ?Je dois le rendre aujourd'hui! Je dois faire une production écrite:
La population de Londres en a assez de la situation dans l’East End: criminalité, insalubrité,exploitation des enfants pauvres... Un groupe de personnes à l’origine de cette protestation a décidé de les aider en s’adressant directement à la reine Victoria, et tu es chargé(e) de rédiger la pétition.
Voici le plan qu’on t’a suggéré. Sers-t-en pour rédiger ton texte : 1) describe the situation, (décrire la situation) 2) suggest what is needed, (suggérer des mesures, des solutions) 3) explain why it is needed. (expliquer en quoi elles sont nécessaires)
Your Majesty, The people in the East End…
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lodiana23
Your Majesty, The people in the East End were obliged to leave with criminality. Kids were forced to work for bring money at home. They had to do work hard for their family, cause they leave in misery. It's horrible. What I suprises is when i see their apartment! What it little! One room for ten person! I suggered most solution for help their : You can offer logements, give some money, build schools and create more job. This amelioration allow at the population in the East End had to a better life. For kids it's more easy too, they can go to school and they didn't work.
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The people in the East End were obliged to leave with criminality. Kids were forced to work for bring money at home. They had to do work hard for their family, cause they leave in misery. It's horrible. What I suprises is when i see their apartment! What it little! One room for ten person!
I suggered most solution for help their : You can offer logements, give some money, build schools and create more job.
This amelioration allow at the population in the East End had to a better life. For kids it's more easy too, they can go to school and they didn't work.
Most respectfully,
Your humble subjects.