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Pouvez vous svp corriger mon texte ci dessous , c'est à dire reformuler des phrases autrement avec des mots simples , afin que ma prof croit que c'est moi qui l'ai écrit svp.
Pouvez vous svp simplifier les mots , les phrases ??
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Dear Diary, I spoke with Lady Catherine today. She wants me not to marry her nephew. According to her, this young man, Mr Darcy, must marry his daughter. My purpose was not to cause her pain by refusing to make an engagement never to marry Mr Darcy, but... but it was stronger than I was. I refused to be persuaded, to be influenced, intimidated by his arguments, his orders, his hurtful allusions, that I am an unreasonable woman. Lady Catherine also insinuated that Darcy was superior to her, or at least that Darcy's family was superior to hers. Elizabeth replied that Mr Darcy was a good man, and that she was the daughter of a good man, and so, on that point, they were equal.In any case, if I had promised, would their marriage be more certain? Supposing he were attached to me, would my refusal to accept his hand make him inclined to agree to it with his cousin? I am not so simple in character, I am not so easy to deal with, and I have told her not to interfere in my affairs. But why did I refuse that promise? Probably because deep down I might accept Mr Darcy's love, for I feel something for him. In fact I could not bring myself to lie and answer in the affirmative when Lady Catherine asked me, "And do you promise never to make such a commitment?" but she also made me so furious with her insulting, frivolous remarks about me, about my young Sister Lydia and her husband Mr Wickham speaking of their escape, Mr Darcy's father's intendant. I became angry, and so I ended the discussion!
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Dear Diary, I talked with Lady Catherine today. She wants me not to marry her nephew. Apparently to her , this young man, Mr Darcy, must marry his son. My objectif was not to cause her sadness by refusing to make an engagement never to marry Mr Darcy, but... but it was stronger than I was. I refused to be tought , to be influenced, intimidated by his arguments, his orders, his hurtful allusions, that I am an unreasonable woman. Lady Catherine also insinuated that Darcy was superior to her, or at least that Darcy's family was superior to hers. Elizabeth replied that Mr Darcy was a good man, and that she was the daughter of a good man, and so, on that point, they were equal.In any case, if I had promised, would their marriage be more certain? Supposing he were close to me, would my refusal to accept his hand make him inclined to agree to it with his cousin? I am not so simple in description, I am not so easy to deal with, and I have told her not to interfere in my affairs. But why did I refuse that promise? Probably cause deep down I might accept Mr Darcy's love, for I feel something for him. In fact I could not bring myself to lie and answer in the affirmative when Lady Catherine asked me, "And do you promise never to make such a commitment?" but she also made me so nervous with her bad words , mean remarks about me, about my little Sister Lydia and her husband Mr Wickham talking of their escape, Mr Darcy's father's intendant. I became angry, and so I stopped the discussion!
voila j'ai simplifier