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I am searching for a teacher job. I would like to work with you because you have the most privileged school in the country. I have a master’s from Oxford University and I have worked as a babysitter since I was 12 years old.
I think I would be a good teacher principally because I love the kids. I can keep them happy and help them. I am able to learn everything very fast.I am also able to speak more than 4 languages and I am capable of working in a group. I am a patient, responsible, punctual,calm and creative person. But I'm not perfect I am also a confident, determined ,perfectionist, worried and a very honest person.
My name is … and I am 24 years old.
You can call me if you need anything. I can be reached at 638-7477
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
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I am searching for a teacher job. I would like to work with you because you have the most privileged school in the country. I have a master’s from Oxford University and I have worked as a babysitter since I was 12 years old.
I think I would be a good teacher principally because I love the kids. I can keep them happy and help them. I am able to learn everything very fast.I am also able to speak more than 4 languages and I am capable of working in a group. I am a patient, responsible, punctual,calm and creative person. But I'm not perfect I am also a confident, determined ,perfectionist, worried and a very honest person.
My name is … and I am 24 years old.
You can call me if you need anything. I can be reached at 638-7477
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
…
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I am looking for a job as a teacher. I would like to work with you because you have the most privileged school in the country. I have a master's from Oxford University and I have worked as a babysitter since I was 12 years old.
I think I would be a good teacher principally because I love the kids. I can keep them happy and help them. I am able to learn everything very fast. I can speak over 4 languages and am capable of working in a group. I am a patient, responsible, punctual, calm and creative person, but not perfect. I am also a confident, determined , perfectionist, worried and very honest person.
My name is … and I am 24 years old.
You can call me if you need anything. I can be reached at 638-7477
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Explications :
Don't put worried like that because it's not very clear. Also I wasn't sure what master's from Oxford... meant so I didn't change that.