J'ai écrit un texte en anglais pour mon oral de 3ème. Ce texte parle de mes passions , ma personnalité , mes projets futurs. Comme je devrais le dire à l'oral , pouvez vous s'il vous plait rendre les phrases les plus simples possible ? Pouvez vous aussi svp dire un avis sur mon texte car je ne trouve pas qu'il est bien pour un oral ? Merci d'avance. Cet oral doit durer environ 3 minutes !
My name is Lola. I am 14 years old and I am a freshman at xxxxxxxxxx middle school in XXX. Later , I would like to be a school teacher because I really love children. I’am fond of animals , especially cats , because , to me , they are calm and loving. In my spare time. I enjoy painting and acting. It allows me to express myself and as well to free me of tensions. I enjoy cycling too so I can wander off almost everywhere. After middle school , I would like to go a general high school. I am aware that I will have to work more and that’s what intend to so ! I’am pretty sure I have the skills to go a general High School because I can use computer tools such as Scratch and Libre Office. And I can also speak 3 langages that are:
- French - Spanish - English
After High School , I would want to obtain a Master degree 2 of education and pass the National Education Competition named CRPE to be able a school teacher. This job has always interested me. But what really decided me to do it was the orientation EPI and my work experience at kindergaten.
I think I have the qualities required to be a good school teacher because :
I am responsible and vigilant because I have already had some experiences with children in the past. So , if I was a maitress , I would make sure to look after the children’s security. I listen to others because I have already reasured my friends or family when they were in critical situations. As a maitress , my pupils would the confide in me without any worries. I am also creative because I have already invented kinds of game to occupy my little sister when she was bored. As a school teacher , I would then be able to create new workshops for my pupils.
Despite that , I still have some flaws : I am indecise because I can hardly make choices. And , I’m pretty slow because I can take a lot of time doing my homework. But , I am convinced that the profession of school teacher would suit me well !
Merci.
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ticiagaubiac1
Alors je suis en train de lire ton texte et j en suis au 2 paragraphe, et quand tu dit '' I enjoy cycling too so I can wander off almost everywhere.'' bah tu devrait enlevé '' too so'' aussi
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Lola9999
d'accord merci , il n'y a rien à changer ??
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