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J'ai écrit un texte en anglais pour mon oral de 3ème. Ce texte parle de mes passions , ma personnalité , mes projets futurs.
Comme je devrais le dire à l'oral , pouvez vous s'il vous plait rendre les phrases les plus simples possible ? Pouvez vous aussi svp dire un avis sur mon texte car je ne trouve pas qu'il est bien pour un oral ?
Merci d'avance. Cet oral doit durer environ 3 minutes !
( En effet, je sais que j'ai posté plusieurs fois le même devoir mais j'attends une réponse de bonne qualité car ce texte est pour mon oral de brevet alors j'aimerais le réussir à tout prix ! )
My name is Lola. I am 14 years old and I am a freshman at xxxxxxxxxx middle school in XXX. Later , I would like to be a school teacher because I really love children.
I love also animals , especially cats.
In my spare time. I like painting and acting because it allows me to express myself and as well to free me of tensions.
I enjoy cycling I can wander off almost everywhere.
After middle school , I would like to go a general high school.
I am aware that I will have to work more and that’s what intend to so !
I’am pretty sure I have the skills to go a general High School because I can use computer tools such as Scratch and Libre Office. And I can also speak 3 langages that are:
- French
- Spanish
- English
After High School , I would want to obtain a Master degree 2 of education and pass the National Education Competition named CRPE to be able a school teacher.
This job has always interested me. But what really decided me to do it was the orientation EPI and my work experience at kindergaten.
I think I have the qualities required to be a good school teacher because :
I am responsible and vigilant because I have already had some experiences with children in the past. So , if I was a mistress , I would make sure the children’s security.
I listen to others because I have already reasured my friends or family when they were in critical situations. As a maitress , my pupils would the confide in me.
I am also creative because I have already invented kind of game to occupy my little sister when she was bored. As a school teacher , I would then be able to create new workshops for my pupils.
Despite that , I still have some flaws :
I am indecise because I can hardly make choices.
And , I’m pretty slow because I can take a lot of time doing my homework.
But , I am convinced that the profession of school teacher would suit me well !
Merci.
J'ai écrit un texte en anglais pour mon oral de 3ème. Ce texte parle de mes passions , ma personnalité , mes projets futurs.
Comme je devrais le dire à l'oral , pouvez vous s'il vous plait rendre les phrases les plus simples possible ? Pouvez vous aussi svp dire un avis sur mon texte car je ne trouve pas qu'il est bien pour un oral ?
Merci d'avance. Cet oral doit durer environ 3 minutes !
( En effet, je sais que j'ai posté plusieurs fois le même devoir mais j'attends une réponse de bonne qualité car ce texte est pour mon oral de brevet alors j'aimerais le réussir à tout prix ! )
My name is Lola. I am 14 years old and I am a freshman at xxxxxxxxxx middle school in XXX. Later , I would like to be a school teacher because I really love children.
I love also animals , especially cats.
In my spare time. I like painting and acting because it allows me to express myself and as well to free me of tensions.
I enjoy cycling I can wander off almost everywhere.
After middle school , I would like to go a general high school.
I am aware that I will have to work more and that’s what intend to so !
I’am pretty sure I have the skills to go a general High School because I can use computer tools such as Scratch and Libre Office. And I can also speak 3 langages that are:
- French
- Spanish
- English
After High School , I would want to obtain a Master degree 2 of education and pass the National Education Competition named CRPE to be able a school teacher.
This job has always interested me. But what really decided me to do it was the orientation EPI and my work experience at kindergaten.
I think I have the qualities required to be a good school teacher because :
I am responsible and vigilant because I have already had some experiences with children in the past. So , if I was a mistress , I would make sure the children’s security.
I listen to others because I have already reasured my friends or family when they were in critical situations. As a maitress , my pupils would the confide in me.
I am also creative because I have already invented kind of game to occupy my little sister when she was bored. As a school teacher , I would then be able to create new workshops for my pupils.
Despite that , I still have some flaws :
I am indecise because I can hardly make choices.
And , I’m pretty slow because I can take a lot of time doing my homework.
But , I am convinced that the profession of school teacher would suit me well !
Merci.
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Bonjour, voici ton texte avec des phrases plus courtesMy name is Lola. I am 14 years old and I am a freshman at xxxxxxxxxx middle school in XXX.
Later, I would like to be a school teacher because I really love children.
I also love animals , especially cats.
In my spare time. I like painting and acting. It allows me to express myself andto free me of tensions.
I enjoy cycling , it makes me wander off everywhere.
After middle school , I would like to go to a general high school.
I am awar that i'll have to work a lot but I'm prepared to it.
I’am pretty sure I have the skills to go a general High School for many reasons.
I can use computer tools such as Scratch and Libre Office. And I can also speak 3 langages that are:
- French
- Spanish
- English
After High School , I want to obtain a Master degree 2 of education Furthermore I want to take the National Education Competition named CRPE to be able a school teacher.
This job has always interested me. My work experience at kindergaten, as well as my EPI, convinced me that it is what I want to do
I think I have the qualities required to be a good school teacher :
I am responsible and vigilant. I have already had some experiences with children in the past. Knowing myself, I would make sure the children’s security.
I listen to others.I've had many opportunities to reassure my friends and family when they were in critical situations. As a maitress , my pupils will surely confide in me.
I am also creative . I invented a kind of game to occupy my little sister when she was bored.
As a school teacher , I would then be able to create new workshops for my pupils.
Despite that , I still have some flaws :
I am indecise ! I can hardly make choices.
And , I’m pretty slow ... It can take me a lot of time doing my homework.
But , I am convinced that the profession of school teacher would suit me well !